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            Forgetting you

            October 11, 2018
            By Moesah BRONZE, Santa Ana, California
            Moesah BRONZE, Santa Ana, California
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            Forgetting you

            Your bittersweet kisses

            Make me forget

            The worse is gone

            When I am with you, I'm at my highest

            When you’re gone I feel my lowest

            Loving you will kill me yet,

            I can’t stop

            I know having you stay is a hidden sin

            But I think of you every day

            Your smile entices me

            Your eyes invite me

            Your laugh excites me

            Your cries break me

            Hurting you was not planned, but loving you was

            I wish I could take it back

            Feel your touch

            But you are my past

            And someone else’s future

            You are not mine

            And I need to forget you


            The author's comments:

            This piece was inspired by my broken heart... 


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            katia_na said...
            on Feb. 22 at 9:38 pm
            katia_na, Smoky Lake, Alberta
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            Favorite Quote:
            If this was a story
            I would say to wait for the ending
            But this is a poem
            And poems don't have endings

            Hey if you ever need someone to talk to im here because believe me I know how much love can push like, people don't seem to understand that love can kill or save and we all gamble in it we that advantage in it because we don't understand.

            yusufmahmoud said...
            on Dec. 19 2019 at 2:25 pm
            yusufmahmoud, Sacramento, California
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            what I like about the poem is that its about the love he has for his sweetheart. Talking about "your eyes invite me, your laugth excites me."But, loving someone so much that he hast to be away from her.

            on Dec. 19 2019 at 2:25 pm
            MahendraSingh, Sacramento, California
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            This poetry is very heartfull i'd love to read more

            Marcolopez said...
            on Dec. 19 2019 at 2:18 pm
            Marcolopez, Sacramento, California
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            This is the best one i've seen. Its heart touching. what made you write this masterpiece?

            on Nov. 29 2019 at 1:22 am
            sarahshahzad BRONZE, Other, Other
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            amazing words..!! I love to write as well, have my own poetry but this is realy amazing..

            on Nov. 26 2019 at 8:16 am
            fatimahtuz-zahra BRONZE, England, Other
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            Favorite Quote:
            Don't be pushed around by the fears in your mind.๐Ÿ–ค๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œ๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ–ค .Be led by the dreams in your heart.

            this poem was awesome great job!๐Ÿ˜€

            on Nov. 18 2019 at 10:53 am
            Makayla55555 BRONZE, Twin Lake, Michigan
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            Favorite Quote:
            "Act as if what you do makes a difference.
            IT DOES."

            This piece was wonderful

            on Jun. 4 2019 at 8:40 am
            Isaiahwoodruff123, Newark, Delaware
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            This poem was a lot better then expected good job !

            Moejoe24 said...
            on Jun. 3 2019 at 10:44 am
            Moejoe24, New York City, New York
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            This is kinda cute

            jenny-talia said...
            on Jun. 3 2019 at 8:27 am
            jenny-talia, Penis, Idaho
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            I like boys

            lolawashere said...
            on May. 31 2019 at 1:26 pm
            lolawashere, Shelton, Washington
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            Love this

            iloveme1011 said...
            on Apr. 2 2019 at 6:51 pm
            iloveme1011, Greensboro, North Carolina
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            Wow!! This is super romantic!!

            TKS SILVER said...
            on Mar. 18 2019 at 9:45 am
            TKS SILVER, Christiansburg, Virginia
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            Favorite Quote:
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            This piece is honestly a mood.

            on Mar. 7 2019 at 1:20 pm
            marine6704 SILVER, Fishers, Indiana
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            Favorite Quote:
            "/Friends are not just a relationship, or a book unwritten. its a BOND OVER TIME" Elisabeth Shinault

            What a well written poem! You connect people with similiar experiences without even saying a specific experiences. Well you at least had me feel like I knew what was happening. Great job on the flow!

            Kadin73 BRONZE said...
            on Mar. 5 2019 at 11:57 am
            Kadin73 BRONZE, Murfreesboro, Tennessee
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            Favorite Quote:
            "see, the night doth enfold us."
            - Giacomo Puccini

            Lovely darling. This is a deep poetic masterpiece. Reminds me of my Allpoetry days when I was writing deep poems.

            on Feb. 26 2019 at 10:23 am
            Brookie-cookie BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
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            I love this and hoe deep it is. It really is so relatable and brings up many feeling. I would really appreciate it if you could check out my work aswell, because I am a new writer. Thank you!

            on Feb. 8 2019 at 11:42 am
            lydiagerges BRONZE, Franklin, Wisconsin
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            i can't express how this writing makes me feel a certain way. I love it so much, you're writing voice is truly beautiful. it would mean the world to me if you could read my writing and give me any feedback!! xoxo

            on Feb. 5 2019 at 1:40 pm
            lindseypeoples BRONZE, Greenwood, Arkansas
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            i love how this poem just flows... it isn't wrote in a way that is too pretty its fake. it is real and super good !

            on Jan. 24 2019 at 7:40 am
            iamcloudyeyes SILVER, Spokane Valley, Washington
            9 articles 1 photo 7 comments

            Favorite Quote:
            we are like human beings
            used to be before they became
            too civilized to enjoy themselves
            - Don Marquis, The Lesson of the Moth

            It really be that way.
            I feel for this on a whole level, if I am being serious.
            Wonderfully written.

            on Jan. 10 2019 at 10:37 am
            Lilsis14567 BRONZE, Cohoes, New York
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            i know how you feel i have been through the same thing and it really hurts you in the end but stay strong